Monday, March 14, 2011

Voices in my head



Amidst the sea of emptiness,
Stretching between both the sidewalks,
Amidst the sombre memories of rain-drenched afternoons,
Amidst the cacophony of insane voices,
There's the surreal dream of life-
Not a mere shadow of an existence.
There's a voice of righteousness waiting to be heard-
Feeble, but full of optimism.
There's the beckoning of pensive solitude,
Imploring one to lose oneself in its endless maze....
And there's an impassioned desire to measure eternity.



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13 comments:

Blasphemous Aesthete said...

Reminds me of a poem by Blake,
To see a world in a grain of sand,
And a heaven in a wild flower,
Hold infinity in the palm of your hand,
And eternity in an hour.


Nice one!

Cheers,
Blasphemous Aesthete

Giribala said...

Like it!!

Alka Gurha said...

I wish I understood poetry...but sounds lovely.

inquisitive-life said...

Nice one.... vivacious..

Paulami said...

feels like there are more lines to it then what is pt forward...

Purba said...

Didn't Plato say "Time is the moving image of eternity".

Shail Raghuvanshi said...

That was a wonderful use of words for expressing emotions Samadrita..

Keep writing...

cloud nine said...

great one!!!

dialoguewithyou said...

Beautiful play with words :)

Anish said...

The first two times I read it I didn't understand-The 3rd time I not only understood but was really moved and couldn't help admire the use of words!Really beautiful and melancholy!

Nethra said...

We are always hopeful and always seeking for something better, aren't we?

Btw, your poems are really good.

iamyuva said...

that's scream trouble.. since its thinking n analyzing.. which never ends well.. :)

you write well..

D2 said...

Always listen to what your mind says. It is never wrong. It never thinks too far ahead.

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