Thursday, January 21, 2010

From the shadows

Here goes my 7th specimen of 55-fiction.Let me know your thoughts on it :)

She watched the road through her tinted shades.
The convoy of black limousines passed by the rows of silent mourners on the sidewalk-the president on his last journey.
A bead of tear trickled down her right cheek.
Nobody noticed.
No one knew the deceased president had an illegitimate daughter.






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24 comments:

☆Ths[Schrei]☆ said...

WOW! Nice one!

Nightwing said...

good one...you have gotten really good at this format....

Selenium said...

O_O

I can never put so much in 100 words let alone 55 words...

Samadrita said...

@Schrei:Hey girl I'm happy to know you liked it!

@Nightwing:I hope I have :P

Samadrita said...

@Selenium: Hey this is the beauty of 55-fiction.It says a lot in 55 words and leaves a hell lot unsaid.
If this is your first time hearing about 55-fiction then you might wanna look up wiki. :)

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

aww..the last sentence strikes me..T_T that's a nice 55 fiction..so good
by the way, my new post:

movie review of 5 centimeetrs per second

check it out~! ^_^

Siddhesh 'Ravan' Kabe said...

hey this was nice...don't know to feel sad or bad!!!

Shruti said...

WOW!! It was really awesome sammy! Too good :)

wisewit said...

I'm not really in the right mood to appreciate it properly, but I think I like it. It seems kind of touching.

wisewit

Anil said...

naice :)

Samadrita said...

@ayu:Thanks girl.I already commented on your review :)

Samadrita said...

@Sid:Yea sad ne?Somehow my stories always end up being sad. XD

Samadrita said...

@wisewit:Hey good to see you on my blog again :) but why do you sound so sad?is everything alright?
I hope you're okay.

Samadrita said...

@Anil: Glad you feel that way!

somsubhra said...

Wow,this is really good! This here's some very fine writing! Kudos to you,lady.

And I agree,some things are better left unsaid.

heavealie said...

ohh finally you are on a posting spree!!this was a nice read.55 fiction are really tough to write and you did a good job here.this was different from the usual 55 fictions and so liked the concept.ohh btw i was in kolkata for 5days.it was super cold and i mean like a freezer!!but the place was nice and people of kolkata are really super friendly so had nice time there!!anyways well written and keep writing!!

♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ ayu ♫ Ƹ̵̡Ӝ̵̨̄Ʒ ♫ said...

well..i se your point but if you have watched all of Makoto Shinkai's work..you'll realize it was intentional and the bad ending reflected the real scenarios we are facing..hmm..i can say i love the film not because of its sad ending(i like sad ending..)but because it values how persons can be together in one part but in the next moment..They'll be separating inevitably..

i was also like"why the heck is that THE ENDING??" i also dont like it..i want them to be together despite the hardships and distances..but if we set aside our emotional personal belief towards the ending..we'll finally realize why did the ending is that way..

Samadrita said...

@heavealie:Yea I will be posting regularly now.Glad you liked the story :)

Samadrita said...

@somsubhra:Thanks senpai. :)

Shruti said...

U forgot 2 reply me or dint accept my comment :(

Samadrita said...

Oops I really did miss your comment. I can be a pro at overlooking stuff you know.Sowwie!
Thanks for the lovely comment Shruti!
I'm glad you commented again to point it out. :)

Karthik said...

Such a morose story written in just under 55 words. Too good, yar. Liked it a lot. :)

Samadrita said...

Karthik:Thanks dude! :)

Enchanta said...

Oh my God!
I am dumbstruck!

*Standing Ovation*

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