Sunday, September 13, 2009

Surreal Promises

If flowers were to ever bloom again-
In this dead garden of mine.
Then I'd kneel down,as if in prayer.
And whisper your name.

If the clouds were to ever move aside-
And reveal the sun,
I promise to hold myself together-
And never come undone.

If the lonely winds were to ever blow my way-
And ease this ever-lasting pain-
Maybe then I'll regain my faith-
And never lose it again.

If I were to ever see you again-
Like in some pleasant,long-forgotten dream-
I would not ask you why-
Or how or when.
But only tell you stories-
That have never been told before.
And watch a glorious sunset together-
Just once more.

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24 comments:

Nightwing said...

very nice....isnt it this way with most of us??beautiful and surreal....

Aparna said...

very profound


this poem spills love and awesomeness

Aditya said...

Awesome and beautiful. I bow down to people who can weave magic with words :)

Atindriyo said...

eerie....haunting....melancholic....

SiMbA tAgO said...

very expressive... great poem ... nice lines.... melodious

freelancer said...

magical

loved the lines yu weaved

Samadrita said...

@Nightwing:Yes I guess it is :)

@Aparna:Love?maybe.But I donno for whom or what.

@Aditya:Thank you!

@Atindriyo:- :)

@SiMbA tAgO:Glad you feel that way!

@freelancer:I'm glad you do.

ARINDAM DEY said...

Its a beautiful poem... Loved the final stanza... Keep up the good work!
Regards.

NINAD...ENGINEER CUM POET! LOL!! said...

beautiful poem...view my blog too.. waiting for suggestions.. http://ninadbhangle.blogspot.com

Samadrita said...

@ARINDAM DEY:Thanks a lot. :)

@Ninad:Sure thing.Stay in touch!

Manju said...

that's beautiful!
i wish i could write poems >_<

p.s yes you should really check our true Blood if you can get your hands on the dvds
and thanks for dropping by my blog ^^

animita said...

another nice of work :)...loved it..

Samadrita said...

@Manju:Thanks and it was a pleasure dropping by your blog :)

@animita:Thanks buddy! *hugs*

Manju said...

Yep, totally painless, and totally works.
fill a plastic bad with water, make sure you tie it well. stuff it inside the shoes, and leave in the freezer overnite. the water in the bag freezes and loosens the shoe a little bit. then you just take it out, leave to defrost, take out the bag and wear the shoes without suffering at all ^^

Shas said...

Beautifully expressed.

Samadrita said...

@Manju:Wow I never knew that.Thanks for sharing the info :)

@Shas:Thank you!

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Samadrita said...

@Onion Insights:Sure thing.But let me think about this a bit okay?
And thanks for stopping by my blog. :)

Nicole said...

beautiful poem.. keep writing... you have talent there.

Samadrita said...

@Nicole:Thanks a lot for those words. :)

Quintessence Of Illusion said...

Beautiful expressions........seems lyk an easily flowing fluid

sawan said...

its beautiful!!!

Esther said...
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Samadrita said...

@Writu,Sawan:Thank you.

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